Invitation to Poetry: Summer’s Sweet Slowness

July 27, 2009 · by Christine

Welcome to our 38th Poetry Party!

I select an image and suggest a theme/title and invite you to respond with your poems or other reflections. Add them in the comments section and a link to your blog (if you have one).  Make sure to check the comments for new poems added and I encourage you to leave encouraging comments for each other either here or at the poet’s own blog.

Feel free to take your poem in any direction and then post the image and invitation on your blog if you have one and encourage others to come join the party! (permission is granted to reprint the image if a link is provided back to this post)

On Friday, July 31st, I will draw a name at random from those who participate and send the winner a signed copy of my newest zine: Sacred Poetry: An Invitation to Write.

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Poetry Party Theme: Summer’s Sweet Slowness

The other day I posted a list on my blog of things whose sweetness should be savored slowly on summer days.  I invited you to make your own additions to the list and I really enjoyed reading them.  So this Poetry Party is an extension of that theme.  This week it will be in the mid-nineties and sunny here in Seattle, very unusual weather for us, weather that demands we all slow down and savor the height of summer days.  Summer’s invitation is to linger and and notice the beauty in small things.

If you contributed to the previous  list already consider turning it into a poem.  Everyone is invited to create their own Ode to Summer’s Gifts!

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32 Responses to “Invitation to Poetry: Summer’s Sweet Slowness”

  1. Janet in Toronto Says:

    warmth makes lids heavy
    the book drops onto her chest
    napping on the porch

  2. stacy wills Says:

    we gather on the porch at dusk
    ready to shell the peas we’ve picked
    settling into rocking chairs and
    scooping handfuls of slender goodness into piles
    on the newspaper-covered table before us
    we set about our sacred task
    with four heads bowed low
    over white enamel bowls trimmed in red
    the gentle murmur of pleasant conversation
    combines with the steady hum of the slowly oscillating fan
    sounding like prayers at evensong
    as we intuitively finger our tiny green rosary beads

  3. kathy flugel colle Says:

    Circles within circles,
    unending joy….
    Reflect the light,
    Crawl slowly over life’s terrain.
    Even when feeling miniscule
    there is the possibility of flight.

  4. kigen Says:

    SLOW, SWEET, SUMMER, Part II
    by Sei Shonagon (Japanese court lady, b. ca. 965)
    from The Pillow Book, # 122, tr. by Ivan Morris
    ___ ___ ___

    In the Fifth Month [July], I love going up to a mountain village.

    When one passes a marsh on the way, a thick covering of weeds hides the water and it seems like a stretch of green grass;

    but as the escorts walk across these patches the water spurts up under their feet though it is quite shallow.

    The water is incredibly clear and looks very pretty as it gushes forth.

    When the road runs between the hedges, a branch will sometimes thrust its way into the carriage.

    One snatches at it quickly, hoping to break it off;

    alas, it always slips out of one’s hand.

    Sometimes one’s carriage will pass over a branch of sagebrush, which then gets caught in the wheel, and is lifted up at each turn, letting the passengers breathe its delicious scent.
    ___ ___ ___

  5. lucy Says:

    Summer Sweetness

    Dressed in my glossy red coat
    adorned with perfect black dots,
    I tip a feeler into the warm summer air.
    Ahhh.
    The bark feels cool and
    safe beneath my bare feet.
    Perfect for a slow stroll
    on a summer day.

    Shall I stick close to home or
    spread my wings and fly?
    The world offers much to explore.
    Hmmm.
    Which outlook will I prefer today–
    comfy barkside view or
    daring aerial vista?
    Summer sweetness beckons.

  6. Richard Wells Says:

    Hmm, Christine if you think it’s appropriate I’ll post, but as for now I’ll use this handy hideout as eros drifts through:
    LET ME BE THE BREEZE

  7. Richard Wells Says:

    ooops, it was late and I looked at the words “summer’s sweet slowness” but not the picture. I think my poem suits the words, but definitely not the photo.

  8. Grady Patterson Says:

    Icy drinks
    with peaches or berries
    slowly cooling and refreshing
    as I swallow

    Cool mountain streams
    surrounded by evergreen
    feet dangling
    in the burbling, noisy water

    Surf – rushing
    in haste to conquer gravity
    then being pulled back to its bed,
    taking sand and pebbles with it

    Fresh corn,
    still on the cob
    dripping with sweet juices
    and melted butter

    Children
    playing frisbee or softball or soccer
    running, laughing,
    secure in their abandonment to joy

    Faces
    of friends and family
    smudged
    by traces of BBQ sauce or watermelon juice

    Long talks
    with the wife of my youth
    about nothing and everything,
    things great and small

    These are the things
    that time should not mar
    Hurry should be kept
    at distance – afar

    Dripping like fruit juice
    from cheek and from chin
    steeped in the sweetness
    taking it in

  9. Carolyn Says:

    Grady – Everything about your poem resonates with me and it is hard to pick a favorite verse….there’s the one about ‘long talks about the [wife] of my youth – about nothing and everything, things great and small’….and I am particularly drawn to a bit of the summary: ‘These are the things that time should not mar – Hurry should be kept at distance – afar’.

    Thanks for this offfering.

  10. Rebecca Says:

    Check out my poem entry on my blog. Thank you for a wonderful prompt!

  11. Tom Delmore Says:

    Ladybugs

    Where did they come from?
    The one in my pocket is
    not a guest.
    I thought a remnant of candy
    but a certain smell it emits.
    Rolling the bug of Our Lady
    ignites wings, and fly’s.

    These are miracle bugs,
    Morphed angels
    possibly.
    I find two more, one on my
    pant leg, one in my car.

    I uphold a reverence for these bugs.
    But why surround me? I am not halo bound.
    Do I emote suffering, to be devoured?

  12. Terri Says:

    Ladybug’s Tabernacle

    Welcome to the tabernacle of the ladybug!
    Join us in our opening hymn, The Glory of the Tree.

    Glory, Glory, Glory to the highest.
    Glory, Glory, Glory to the tree.

    Gracious Tree of Life,

    You precede our needs with a path laid in wisdom.
    The crooked cracks of your bark lead us to sustenance.
    Grant us the wisdom to walk the labyrinth of crevices.
    Relying on you to provide the guidance we need.
    To arrive at the life-giving source.

    In the name of the Tree, the Leaf, and the Aphid,

    Amen.

  13. kigen Says:

    Christine, just to mention that the court LADY
    on her journey into the mountains in my entry
    parallels the LADY bug on her journey climbing
    up the bark in your photo. ((-:

  14. Laure Says:

    when i hold you
    with my eyes only
    i want to move beyond touching
    your skin, that sweet rind
    keeping your best secrets

  15. Christine Says:

    I have such wonderful poets as readers, I am really relishing these words during a very full week. More responses from me soon, but for now I am just savoring the sweetness!

  16. Janet in Toronto Says:

    Laure….I love your poem! Very “song of solomon”.

  17. Laure Says:

    thank you, Janet. your kindness blesses!

  18. Grady Patterson Says:

    Thanks, Carolyn – I do appreciate it! I’m not sure I have a favorite verse, either – but if I had to pick, it would probably (even though it is the least specific to summer) be the “Long talks with the wife of my youth” part, too. I have been blessed with an amazing wife, and after 23 years, she is still my favorite person to spend time with!

  19. Dianne Says:

    For me, it’s long summer nights. Thanks for this wonderful prompt! I posted the following at my blog:

    Summer beams down
    gracious rays of warmth
    and grace, postcards from
    a sacred space. an invitation to walk
    slowly through a thin veil
    of sweet summer fragrance.

    A cool breeze pushes aside
    the weighty heat. dusk absorbs
    the noise of the day, gathering us
    to her bosom, until
    like a baby’s sweet slumber,
    we are still.

    Then the almighty locust choir
    kicks into a roaring crescendo,
    with only fireflies for stage lights.
    and the starry night
    becomes an amphitheater
    for God’s majestic symphony.

  20. BEV Says:

    Radiant Beauty

    The insignificant significance of who I am.
    I am the whole world.
    I am a speck in that world.
    I can be fulfilled from within myself.
    I thirst for the externals to feed me.
    Insignificant significance.
    The lady bug – a radiant, unique beauty is significant because of her signficance.
    Can I?

  21. Diane Says:

    “Walking in the Waters of the Oceans Love”

    Feel the soft waters surrounding your bodies
    Embracing its loving refreshing nourishment
    Complete oneness
    As thy attention is in the moment
    Caressing you within its vastness
    The sparking water droplets fly about you
    Softening all that is
    You are soothed in living here
    Taking your time along the way
    No worries
    No hurry
    Just full embracement of what is
    Right now
    Ahhhhhhh….
    Breathing is easy
    Your eyes are bright and shiny in the waters reflections around you…
    All that is beauty is one
    It is carried in you, eternally
    Always there
    The gentle tides
    Caress your legs
    Bringing you to the Sacred Center
    Ahhhhhhh….
    Stay…..
    Forever….
    Constant….
    Creation as one….
    Slow your pace…
    Ever more still…
    Ahhhhhhh…
    Enjoying this days gifts
    Always there
    In you
    Around you
    Ahhhhhhh…..
    Revitalizing
    Healing all
    Peace
    Summers quality
    Spirit
    Loving embraces
    Received, Receiving
    Inviting in each day
    Grateful in God’s Creation

  22. Karen (leapingbackwards) Says:

    “A Summer Day”

    Digging my toes in the garden mud,

    old blossoms golden yellow are beginning to fade

    but new buds appear like a thousand beaming suns.

    I lay in the earthy grass, soft green blades tickling my ears,

    On the radio, Van Morrison calls me sweet as Tupelo honey

    and sends me soaring above the blazing clouds.

    In this moment, time goes backwards through all that ever was

    while deep down joy penetrates every cell of my body

    giving root to the peace and light of knowing.

  23. Elaine T Says:

    Every wedding anniversary in July I try to write a poem for my husband. This is for our 39th. We are so blessed.

    Sweet Summer Love

    Floating on the old water bed
    we rest in the forest peace
    of fir tree guardians
    surrounding our home
    built together
    so many years ago

    Ours is a summer love
    a summer wedding
    summer babies
    teenage summers
    cars coming and going
    in the hot nights
    then too soon
    relatives sleeping in the basement
    kids’ summer weddings

    Now we put on our summer skins
    swim together in the cold silk
    of lake and sound
    Our summer lips
    taste summer wine
    taste the miraculous peach soft skin
    of our summer grandchild
    taste the cherry kisses
    of our sweet sweet summer love

  24. Beth Patterson Says:

    green rosary beads, indeed!

    watering, moving in circles around the wildflowers,
    scattered in ancient motion with the half-moon
    seeds gathered over years
    from many places
    all with an eye to high desert grace

    they make me smile
    these willful, resilient, cheerful guys

    I sit down on my outdoor futon
    under the crabapple
    iced tea sitting on the stump
    that sports a brilliant orange fungi
    growing on the side of it,
    to watch it all
    in astonishment

  25. Pam McCauley Says:

    Lovely Lady

    A lady in red,
    spotted in the tall grass.
    Small hands eager
    to capture summer’s delights.

    A yelp of triumph
    as the trophy is lifted high.
    All come running
    to gather round.

    Slowly and steadily
    she crawls from
    hand to hand,
    her calm unruffled.

    Flying off
    with helicopter wings.
    The lady in red is
    our first love in the garden.

  26. Shawna R. B. Atteberry Says:

    What’s the Hurry?

    All tell me to hurry up
    But what is better
    Than sun shining on your face?

  27. Geoff Rimositis Says:

    Thirty thousand feet flying up in the air
    I am amazed.
    I know it is ubiquitous in its commonness
    but seeing mountains and cities from above the clouds
    never fails to prick my sense of wonder
    no matter how many times I buckle up
    and put my tray in the upright position.
    Ladybug, you do that to me too
    every time by happenstance
    I see you crawling on stem and rock.
    I am amazed.
    I know you have a voracious appetite
    for aphids in my garden that keep you fat and sassy.
    Yet, seeing you immediately lifts my spirits
    not only for the service you provide
    but also because your presence evokes beauty and wonder in me.
    I can then see the trees when before I only looked at them.
    Everything commonplace becomes extraordinary.
    I claim my birthright as a child of creation
    beholding the universe in its splendid diversity.
    I delight in it all.
    Gratitude comes over me
    and I am flush with the warm glow
    of an embarrassment of riches.
    I am amazed.

  28. thymekeeper Says:

    Like watching grass grow

    so moves the inner life

    in this season.

    So sit a spell,

    watch some of earth’s

    smallest creatures

    go about their lives,

    and trust the process.

  29. Christine Says:

    I am really in awe of this outpouring of beauty! I continue to savor each juicy word. Thanks dear poets!

  30. patricia a. boutilier Says:

    City Summer

    fireflies in a jar
    on top of the TV
    phosphorescent lightning
    at midnight

  31. April Belle Says:

    I don’t need to be big to know love.

    Even crawling, I still shine.

    Being small lets me feel

    texture

    and

    breath.

    Residing in stillness…

    there is not big or small.

    Only aliveness.

  32. Amy Says:

    Your beautiful photo inspired a different line of thinking for me:

    small things

    small things often go unnoticed, but

    small things can be beautiful

    small things can be powerful

    small things make a difference

    small things are how big things begin