Invitation to Poetry: Equinox Edition

September 22, 2008 · by Christine

Invitation to Poetry

Poetry Party #24!  I select an image and suggest a title and invite you to respond with your poems, words, reflections, quotes, song lyrics, etc. Leave them in the comments or email me and I’ll add them to the body of the post as they come in along with a link back to your blog if you have one (not required to participate!) I’ll add your contributions all week and then I will draw a name at random on Friday morning from everyone who participates and will send the winner a copy of my first zine Praying with the Elements. Feel free to take your poem in any direction and then post the image and invitation on your blog and encourage others to come join the party!

Today is the autumnal equinox, a time when the sun rests above the equator and day and night are divided equally.  It heralds in a season filled with change and the brilliant beauty of death.  I invite you to write your own ode to autumn.  What are the gifts, challenges, and invitations for you in the days ahead?

*****

Chill September Winds
Trees Embrace Death’s Beauty
Vibrant Colors Fade

-Joe Miller at More Than Cake

*****

fall

these are my favorite days
when the summer heat begins
to fade into fall’s crisp palette
of expectancy and comfort

I want to match the colors
with aromas savory and sweet
layers of flavor and hope that
sustain as the nights grow long

and winter hangs on the horizon
barren branches and grey mornings
the chill that goes bone-deep
as the world falls asleep

on my best days I see the trees
each one a burning bush
leaves letting go with flare (and flair!)
letting go and falling to earth

I turn the lights on earlier
and stir the same reds and oranges
in the pan relishing the sound of the
sizzle of squash and peppers

these are my favorite days
when the cold and dark call
to remember however I fall
love will catch me

-Milton at Don’t Eat Alone 

*****

FOR ALL THINGS DROPPING OFF AND DYING IN AUTUMN,
and for a POND LILY BLOOMING IN NYC THIS MORNING,
a beloved poem by Lal Diddi (14th c.) —

Coursing in emptiness
I,  Lalla,
dropped off body and mind,

and stepped into the Secret Self.

Look:  Lalla the sedgeflower
blossomed a lotus.


Translation from WOMEN IN PRAISE OF THE SACRED
edited by Jane Hirshfield, submitted by Kigen at Eden’s Innuendo

*****

The change of colors
     in our autumn
is to return to
     our original shades

-Rebecca at The Difference a Year Makes

*****

“Melody of Susan”

Isn’t it enough
that the wind storm
has driven away the trill
of the summer cicadas?

And now on this day
of Autumn Equinox
there will still be no balance
to the night and the day.

Where is the other pair
of sacred wing beats   
that use to rise along side
to hide in magnolia?

And while the crimson
deepens to its death
this dove will perch alone
’til the bare branch turns green.

-Bette Norcross Wappner at Surimono Garden

*****

In Which Creator Calls My Name

The Sycamore,
reflecting the sacred
indicative of the season,
beckons:
now, Carolyn, now.

-Carolyn

*****

Crimson Leaf pauses, yellow veins pulsate, and she joins the Wind in a dance of wildest 
        elation.
Last evening, Mischievous Elf splotched her gown with driplets of violet.
With the cries of north-heading birds their only orchestra,
They seem to sing…

“Stop!
Appreciate!
Too soon,
Our dazzling performance
Will be over.”

-Suz Reaney

*****

The Churchyard

Autumn’s gifts of colour
drift obliquely, gently,
on the promise of winter.

Gathered together here,
at the edges of things,
they mourn the season’s loss.

Golden yellows and rustic
browns, lay with deep reds,
brittle with bloodless veins.

The short-lived patchwork stirs,
tumbles again, regrouping,
till winter’s linen is laid.

-Andy at A Man Breathing

***** 

VERNAL EQUINOX (a contribution from the Southern hemisphere)
UTC    080922    15.44

It happened last night:
AEST  080923   01.44.

It came in southern darkness
To say that summer isn’t far away.
It came in the sleepy midnight
To say that winter really would go
And the sun would come to stay.

This is my true herald of hope.
The depression and gloom of winter go
Replaced with hope and blossoming life
And a knowledge that sun and heat
Will cleanse my soul
And joy it into play.

-Miss Eagle at Desert

*****

When Moses saw the burning bush it must have been the Autumnal Equinox, yet such a pharse would not have entered his mind. His sandles were off, resting in blue sand. This sumac with an Eastern name burst crimson before him. No sheep, no jar of water, no shroud to cover his face.
Nature had chosen Moses in this season of dying.
We must allow God his unpredictableness

-Tom Delmore at Crow’s Perch

*****
starting out with equal parts
day and night
with leaves falling
colors richening
and differently scented air
autumn eases into cooler longer nights
for better dreaming
creation winters in sleep
until on the other side
spring bursts open
splendid in resurrection liberty
reborn in greater wisdom
and overflowing depth

so instead of sadness
over another sorrowful summer
I’m ready to welcome
a season of settled quiet
and excited to anticipate
next summer’s festivities!

-Leah Sophia at This Far by Faith

*****

The gate to the next path
on the yearly journey
stands wide and welcoming.

Lit softly, smothered
with crisp bright garlands.
The golden dark lane

invites me through richness
toward the bare, drifting
bone-deep beauty to come.

-Tess and Anchors and Masts

*****

And the dragon and his angels waged war, and they were not strong enough, and there was no longer a place found for them in heaven. And the great dragon was thrown down…Rev. 12.7-9

The great red dragon.
The old stories tell of your time in the heavens;
the woman clothed with the sun, and the war.

The thread you hung by grew weak as
your dashing red matured.
And in your arrogance you were cut loose,
bringing a third with you.

You will only flourish for a season.
The male child will come to rule with iron.
And we, the rocks, will cry out.

-John Blase at Dirty Shame

*****

in the stillness
and the quiet
softly, listening
stark beauty
death to self
waiting, watching as
the realization of change within
falls on me
the Voice
the place of Rest
I can only call it
“Shalom”

-Deb Vaughn at An Unfinished Symphony

*****

Autumn has begun
blue stones hold a reddish leaf
the river hums by

-Martha Louise Harkness

*****

Fall Song

Another year gone, leaving everywhere
its rich spiced residues: vines, leaves,

the uneaten fruits crumbling damply
in the shadows, unmattering back

from the particular island
of this summer, this NOW, that now is nowhere

except underfoot, moldering
in that black subterranean castle

of unobservable mysteries – roots and sealed seeds
and the wanderings of water. This

I try to remember when time’s measure
painfully chafes, for instance when autumn

flares out at the last, boisterous and like us longing
to stay – how everything lives, shifting

from one bright vision to another, forever
in these momentary pastures.

-Mary Oliver (submitted by Suz Reaney)

******

There is a
strange beauty
in a death
accepted with grace…

-Sally Coleman at Eternal Echoes

*****

No Emptiness in Letting Go

The heart of autumn’s gifts
are its twin energies
of relinquishing
and harvesting.

It is a season of paradox
that invites us to consider
what we are called
to release and surrender.

At the same time, it invites us
to gather in the harvest,
to name and celebrate the fruits
of the seeds we planted months ago.

In holding these two in tension,
we are reminded that
in our letting go
we also find abundance.

By Christine! (Paintner that is) :-)
Submitted by Pam (her title)

*****

I don’t want to let go.
At this moment I have something,
I AM something.
What?
What if I let go?
Terrible possibilities
Tantalizing possibilities
Calculating the probabilities….
Tipping from the known to the unknown,
I remember faith and hope.
I let go.

-Wronda

*****

The leaves should be turning the air
sharp with the bite, of frosted
apples heavy in the sun, gleaming
wetly with feasting wasps warmed
by the last lingering caress
of a fleeing sun.

My bones know the turning,
the swing of this old Earth as days
grow shorter, and they wait
in a new land where the oaks,
festooned with Christmas balls
of dusky blue go on
as if time stood still, heat
still dewing the brow as noon
creeps on toward summer, unaware
that winter lives in another place.

The bright shocking red to hold
as a talisman against the coming dark
fades to unreality and bird call
outside my window brings its own shock
in a place where there is no need
to flee South, or beneath the rich
black soil, wet with the last tears
of summer. For all is warm, and dry
forever and ever and we might forget
that anywhere else exists, or that time
spins on without us here where autumn
comes shyly, and gently, if at all.

-Christina at Left Turn at Joy

*****

Questions Posed of a Leaf

Would I have even noticed you
if you had lain there in the drift
of leaves all red and orange and gold
just another vivid token
an ordinary miracle
trampled under foot?

How can it be that you,
separated and fallen from your source of life
can be so exquisite in your dying?

What is the measure of your worth by now?
Too old, beyond your chlorophyll bearing days
no longer exhaling oxygen and gulping CO2
or providing cooling shade,
is your only future the bonfire or the yard bag?
Will you now contribute to the carbon footprint
you reduced when you were truly ‘green’?

Maybe in the best scenario someone’s livelihood
will be to sweep you up to make you into mulch and
spread you on the garden beds.  Or that a child will marvel at you,
choose and give you (gift you are!) to someone dear.

Until then, my brilliant friend, nothing is left for you to do
but to delight the eye.

-Ann Howard at the winding mind

*****

Summer,
no longer are you the seed of promise
or the hope-filled tender shoot.
No longer are you the tight bud
concealing mystery
or the splayed folds of a shameless blossom
wet with perfume.
The hours, liquid and lazy as honey,
have given you all that they could to coax your good fruit
as did the early and late rains and this breathing world.
Now the blade and the hand have come
to cut and pluck your increase
Now is the season of your surrender
inevitable
as you succumb to rest.

-Laure

*****

Held

I fall down to the ground
Unable to rise again
And no desire
To climb back up.

Breath of wind carries me
To all of the places
That I am meant to see.

Coming to rest in the solidity
Of what I can not know
Dissolving into what is.
And shining.
Just shining.

-Rebecca Johnson (from Alaska)

*****

Death having done its worst
you lie in crimson splendor
stark in contrast with a world
that cannot make sense
and so we struggle
and so we stare
at you, made beautiful in death
hoping that death was
not cruel, but merely sudden

-ymp at Means of Grace

*****

The blue stones cradle the fallen,
The bright leaf fell, I saw it float.
Teased by the wind, drifting along.
Up and down, like a bright red boat.

I am not dead, you know, but asleep,
I may lay here silently still; I played
On a branch, watching above, now
Waiting for re-birth; I am unafraid.

I will lose the colour of living, but
Still my body does feed the earth.
I will live to give this tree its life,
That bore me into life cycle’s birth.

Be not afraid, for your life will end
Here, in one sense, it must leave.
As it arrives to where it’s going, know,
Love also begins where it ends; receive.

-S. Diane Trollope at Spiritual Motion

*****

A Japanese Tanka

today’s crisp bouquet
cinnamon and pumpkin pie
upon the mountain
forest green and yellow gold
fall has come to be again

-Annie Thorndike (age 10)

*****

-Christine Valters Paintner @ Abbey of the Arts

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26 Responses to “Invitation to Poetry: Equinox Edition”

  1. Joe Miller Says:

    FALL in haiku

    Chill September Winds
    Trees Embrace Death’s Beauty
    Vibrant Colors Fade

    My post and link back to this thread went up on my blog today at 11:44 am EST (the official start of fall)

  2. don't eat alone Says:

    fall

    these are my favorite days
    when the summer heat begins
    to fade into fall’s crisp palette
    of expectancy and comfort

    I want to match the colors
    with aromas savory and sweet
    layers of flavor and hope that
    sustain as the nights grow long

    and winter hangs on the horizon
    barren branches and grey mornings
    the chill that goes bone-deep
    as the world falls asleep

    on my best days I see the trees
    each one a burning bush
    leaves letting go with flare (and flair!)
    letting go and falling to earth

    I turn the lights on earlier
    and stir the same reds and oranges
    in the pan relishing the sound of the
    sizzle of squash and peppers

    these are my favorite days
    when the cold and dark call
    to remember however I fall
    love will catch me

    Peace,
    Milton

  3. Eden's Innuendo Says:

    FOR ALL THINGS DROPPING OFF AND DYING IN AUTUMN,
    and for a POND LILY BLOOMING IN NYC THIS MORNING,
    a beloved poem by Lal Diddi (14th c.) —

    Coursing in emptiness
    I, Lalla,
    dropped off body and mind,

    and stepped into the Secret Self.

    Look: Lalla the sedgeflower
    blossomed a lotus.


    Translation from WOMEN IN PRAISE OF THE SACRED
    edited by Jane Hirshfield, submitted by Kigen

  4. Rebecca Says:

    The change of colors
    in our autumn
    is to return to
    our original shades

    Rebecca

  5. Joe Miller Says:

    oops, not sure how I did it, but I typed the wrong URL in my blog. The post will be up at http://www.morethancake.org/2008/09/fall.html

    Sorry for the confusion :-)

  6. Bette Says:

    “Melody of Susan”

    Isn’t it enough
    that the wind storm
    has driven away the trill
    of the summer cicadas?

    And now on this day
    of Autumn Equinox
    there will still be no balance
    to the night and the day.

    Where is the other pair
    of sacred wing beats
    that use to rise along side
    to hide in magnolia?

    And while the crimson
    deepens to its death
    this dove will perch alone
    ’til the bare branch turns green.

    Bette Norcross Wappner

  7. Carolyn Says:

    In Which Creator Calls My Name

    The Sycamore,
    reflecting the sacred
    indicative of the season,
    beckons:
    now, Carolyn, now.

  8. Suz Says:

    Crimson leaf pauses, yellow veins pulsate, and she joins the wind in a dance of wildest
    elation.
    Last evening, Mischievous Elf splotched her gown with driplets of violet.
    With the cries of north-heading birds their only orchestra,
    They seem to sing…

    “Stop!
    Appreciate!
    Too soon,
    Our dazzling performance
    Will be over.”

  9. Andy Says:

    The Churchyard

    Autumn’s gifts of colour
    drift obliquely, gently,
    on the promise of winter.

    Gathered together here,
    at the edges of things,
    they mourn the season’s loss.

    Golden yellows and rustic
    browns, lay with deep reds,
    brittle with bloodless veins.

    The short-lived patchwork stirs,
    tumbles again, regrouping,
    till winter’s linen is laid.

  10. Miss Eagle Says:

    Christine, I’m sorry to be a contrarian but where I am it is spring and we are heading for summer – so here is my southern hemisphere contribution. You will find it on my blog (naturally with a link to this) at http://eaglesnestcompanion.blogspot.com/2008/09/vernal-equinox-2008.html

    VERNAL EQUINOX
    UTC 080922 15.44

    It happened last night:
    AEST 080923 01.44.

    It came in southern darkness
    To say that summer isn’t far away.
    It came in the sleepy midnight
    To say that winter really would go
    And the sun would come to stay.

    This is my true herald of hope.
    The depression and gloom of winter go
    Replaced with hope and blossoming life
    And a knowledge that sun and heat
    Will cleanse my soul
    And joy it into play.

  11. Tom Delmore Says:

    When Moses saw the burning bush it must have been the Autumnal Equinox, yet such a pharse would not have entered his mind. His sandles were off, resting in blue sand. This sumac with an Eastern name burst crimson before him. No sheep, no jar of water, no shroud to cover his face.
    Nature had chosen Moses in this season of dying.
    We must allow God his unpredictableness

  12. Leah Says:

    Here’s mine–this time I not only got something finished enough to post; this may be my first time ever on the first day of the party; thanks so much!

    http://thisfarbyfaith.blogspot.com/2008/09/poetry-party-24.html

  13. Tess Says:

    Interesting to read Miss Eagle’s post – I’ve been thinking about this hemisphere question and how strange each must seem to the other.

    Anyway, here’s mine:

    The gate to the next path
    on the yearly journey
    stands wide and welcoming.

    Lit softly, smothered
    with crisp bright garlands.
    The golden dark lane

    invites me through richness
    toward the bare, drifting
    bone-deep beauty to come.

  14. Songbird Says:

    Just wanted to say these are beautiful, thank you.

  15. Deb Says:

    Something poured out of me here

    thanks for this image…

    Deb

  16. Suz Says:

    Just ran across this poem from the prolific, Mary Oliver.
    I like her use of “leaving” and “leaves.”

    Fall Song

    Another year gone, leaving everywhere
    its rich spiced residues: vines, leaves,

    the uneaten fruits crumbling damply
    in the shadows, unmattering back

    from the particular island
    of this summer, this NOW, that now is nowhere

    except underfoot, moldering
    in that black subterranean castle

    of unobservable mysteries – roots and sealed seeds
    and the wanderings of water. This

    I try to remember when time’s measure
    painfully chafes, for instance when autumn

    flares out at the last, boisterous and like us longing
    to stay – how everything lives, shifting

    from one bright vision to another, forever
    in these momentary pastures.

  17. Sally Says:

    There is a
    strange beauty
    in a death
    accepted with grace…

  18. Pam Says:

    Christine,

    Your own words of wisdom last week felt like a poem to me… so here it is. Is this cheating?

    No Emptiness in Letting Go

    The heart of autumn’s gifts
    are its twin energies
    of relinquishing
    and harvesting.

    It is a season of paradox
    that invites us to consider
    what we are called
    to release and surrender.

    At the same time, it invites us
    to gather in the harvest,
    to name and celebrate the fruits
    of the seeds we planted months ago.

    In holding these two in tension,
    we are reminded that
    in our letting go
    we also find abundance.

    By Christine!
    Submitted by Pam (my title)

  19. Wronda Says:

    I don’t want to let go.
    At this moment I have something,
    I AM something.
    What?
    What if I let go?
    Terrible possibilities
    Tantalizing possibilities
    Calculating the probabilities….
    Tipping from the known to the unknown,
    I remember faith and hope.
    I let go.

  20. Christina Says:

    Equinox
    The leaves should be turning the air
    sharp with the bite, of frosted
    apples heavy in the sun, gleaming
    wetly with feasting wasps warmed
    by the last lingering caress
    of a fleeing sun.

    My bones know the turning,
    the swing of this old Earth as days
    grow shorter, and they wait
    in a new land where the oaks,
    festooned with Christmas balls
    of dusky blue go on
    as if time stood still, heat
    still dewing the brow as noon
    creeps on toward summer, unaware
    that winter lives in another place.

    The bright shocking red to hold
    as a talisman against the coming dark
    fades to unreality and bird call
    outside my window brings its own shock
    in a place where there is no need
    to flee South, or beneath the rich
    black soil, wet with the last tears
    of summer. For all is warm, and dry
    forever and ever and we might forget
    that anywhere else exists, or that time
    spins on without us here where autumn
    comes shyly, and gently, if at all.

  21. Ann Howard Says:

    Questions Posed of a Leaf

    Would I have even noticed you
    if you had lain there in the drift
    of leaves all red and orange and gold
    just another vivid token
    an ordinary miracle
    trampled under foot?

    How can it be that you,
    separated and fallen from your source of life
    can be so exquisite in your dying?

    What is the measure of your worth by now?
    Too old, beyond your chlorophyll bearing days
    no longer exhaling oxygen and gulping CO2
    or providing cooling shade,
    is your only future the bonfire or the yard bag?
    Will you now contribute to the carbon footprint
    you reduced when you were truly ‘green’?

    Maybe in the best scenario someone’s livelihood
    will be to sweep you up to make you into mulch and
    spread you on the garden beds. Or that a child will marvel at you,
    choose and give you (gift you are!) to someone dear.

    Until then, my brilliant friend, nothing is left for you to do
    but to delight the eye.

  22. Laure Says:

    Summer,
    no longer are you the seed of promise
    or the hope-filled tender shoot.
    No longer are you the tight bud
    concealing mystery
    or the splayed folds of a shameless blossom
    wet with perfume.
    The hours, liquid and lazy as honey,
    have given you all that they could to coax your good fruit
    as did the early and late rains and this breathing world.
    Now the blade and the hand have come
    to cut and pluck your increase
    Now is the season of your surrender
    inevitable
    as you succumb to rest.

  23. Rebecca Johnson who lives in Alaska Says:

    Held

    I fall down to the ground
    Unable to rise again
    And no desire
    To climb back up.

    Breath of wind carries me
    To all of the places
    That I am meant to see.

    Coming to rest in the solidity
    Of what I can not know
    Dissolving into what is.
    And shining.
    Just shining.

  24. ymp Says:

    Thanks again! Here’s my submission:

    Death having done its worst
    you lie in crimson splendor
    stark in contrast with a world
    that cannot make sense
    and so we struggle
    and so we stare
    at you, made beautiful in death
    hoping that death was
    not cruel, but merely sudden

  25. Diane Trollope Says:

    The blue stones cradle the fallen,
    The bright leaf fell, I saw it float.
    Teased by the wind, drifting along.
    Up and down, like a bright red boat.

    I am not dead, you know, but asleep,
    I may lay here silently still; I played
    On a branch, watching above, now
    Waiting for re-birth; I am unafraid.

    I will lose the colour of living, but
    Still my body does feed the earth.
    I will live to give this tree its life,
    That bore me into life cycle’s birth.

    Be not afraid, for your life will end
    Here, in one sense, it must leave.
    As it arrives to where it’s going, know,
    Love also begins where it ends; receive.

    S. Diane Trollope …Spiritual Motion

  26. Annie Thorndike (age 10) Says:

    A Japanese Tanka

    today’s crisp bouquet
    cinnamon and pumpkin pie
    upon the mountain
    forest green and yellow gold
    fall has come to be again