Invitation to Poetry: Monk in the World

Welcome to our 46th Poetry Party!

The Poetry Parties have been on hiatus for a few months and I am delighted to bring them back as a regular feature this week.

I select an image and suggest a theme/title and invite you to respond with your poems or other reflections. Add your responses in the comments section. Feel free to take your poem in any direction and then post the image and invitation on your blog (if you have one) and encourage others to come join the party! (permission is granted to reprint the image if a link is provided back to this post)

On Friday, August 27th, I will draw a name at random from those who participate and send the winner a copy of Sacred Poetry: An Invitation to Write (an art journal I published with a collection of previous Poetry Party prompts).


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Poetry Party Theme: Monk in the World

I have been so deeply moved by the outpouring of response to my recent Monk Manifesto with almost 300 of you signing (and over 500 are participating in my free 7-day Monk in the World e-course).

As a way to deepen your personal expression of this commitment to live in contemplative, creative, and compassionate ways in the world, I invite you to write a poem which explores what it means for you to be a Monk in the World.  The image above is the reflection of St. Patrick's Cathedral in New York City in the shimmering glass of an adjacent office building.  I love this image because it speaks to me of the meeting place of ancient and modern which is really what living out a monastic way of life in the world is all about.

There is a wonderful poetry-writing exercise from poetry therapist John Fox's book Finding What You Didn't Lose: Expressing Your Truth and Creativity through Poem-Making (I equally recommend his other book Poetic Medicine: The Healing Art of Poem-Making) about exploring your inner poet.  I share the questions here, transposed to explore your inner monk.  Feel free to let this be a prompt for your own writing or take it in an entirely different direction.

Reclaiming Your Inner Monk:

What does your inner monk look like?
What does your inner monk feel like?
Where was your inner monk born?
What does your inner monk see?
Where is your inner monk recognized?
What does your inner monk know?
What does your inner monk imagine?
Where does your inner monk live?
What must your inner monk say aloud?
Why does your inner monk exist?

So please share your own poetic inspirations in the comments section below of living the contemplative life!  Let this be a gathering of monks in a virtual celebration!


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59 Responses to "Invitation to Poetry: Monk in the World"

  1. Deb says:

    I played here… for the first time in a long time. :)

    LINK ADDED: http://unfinsymphony.wordpress.com/2010/08/23/poetry-party-monk-in-the-world/

  2. stacy wills says:

    so glad the poetry parties are back! you can find my offering at my blog.

    • Patricia says:

      Inner Monk

      Tall, dark and handsome
      Strong and smooth
      Born in silence
      Seeing things as they are
      Found in the gaze of others
      He knows nothing more but dreams of possibilities.
      Living in the world, shouting Hallelujah because nothing else expresses it so well.

    • Julett M. Broadnax says:

      Stacy, your vibrant colors, designs and poetry continue to stir my heart. Can envy ever be a positive virtue? My mother used to say it was alright to envy as long as you wished something better for the person or thing you envied. I have mulled over that meaning for some time. Perhaps admiring and desiring of your wonderful talent rather than envy is what I am feeling. It is so very expressive of your inner child/monk/person. I would like to be able to create those deep feelings within myself in some form of art that has color in it.

  3. Maureen says:

    Stacy and Sally, lovely poems.

  4. Andrea Cox says:

    Christene, Thank you for the prompt and inspiration. I have not written any poetry in month, upon seeing the picture, the words just came. Feels so good.
    Beautiful new website.
    Also, I love Sally's, Patricia's and Stacy's work.

    • Andrea Cox says:

      I like being able to read all poems on the same page and then look at blogs. So, I am adding my poem here.

      The heavily cloaked and hooded androgyny deep in the belly of the ancient sacred sanctuary where it is dark and moist illuminated and bathed in golden reflections by two round and richly colored orbs.

      Walking in silence with head bowed, soft steps and almost inaudible breath.

      Alive, aware and conscious, yet perceived as a shadow, hollow and transparent.

      Grounded, yet equally lofty, in the world and off it.

      A solidified mass within ethereal vastness, holy and human, natural and animal alike.

      I am.

      Embodied Spirit.

      Amongst my brothers and sisters,

      I walk.

      I surf the waves.

      I touch.

      I serve.

      I co-create.

      Stepping through the carved portals from the safe heaven of the cloister cell, blinded by the reflection of the new world, I reach for the light and shed my cloak.

      I am.

      Spirit.

      Among my brothers and sisters,

      I soar.

      I praise.

      I serve.

      I celebrate.

  5. Christine E. Merritt says:

    A Monk in the World
    Transparent in sand and sky
    This inner monk reflects upon
    The office of the day;
    pray newness spawn
    Or move into awareness,
    Know the time unknowingly
    Like shadows on the glass,
    Or letting go and letting be;
    Aspiring to clear heaven
    And sing a blue note chime
    Of silence where the bell even
    Echoes chant within one time.

  6. Amy says:

    I have not written poetry in a while, either. Thank you for resurrecting this! Mine can be found here

  7. Martha Louise says:

    Beauty comes anew
    Always we begin again
    Monks in the world

  8. Linda Alley says:

    "This world is not my home,
    I'm just a travelin' through…"
    Words from the past journey
    Echo new meaning.
    When I was twelve, wanting to be a nun,
    impossible for a little Mennonite girl in pigtails.
    When I was twenty, finding the Spirit's power
    in place of my struggles to be good enough.
    When I was forty, restless with the inner tuggings,
    waiting to discern my call.
    When I'm near sixty, settling into God's lap
    for long times of silent holding,
    then into the world,
    but not of the world,
    …somewhere in between.

    –Linda Alley, Harrisonburg, VA
    Spiritual Director, child of God

    • Deb Hillman says:

      incredible….Linda….this poem spoke volumes to me…thank you so much for sharing. Blessings on your journey! Deb

  9. Thanks, Christine! Been missing the 'parties'!

    http://virtualteahouse.com/blogs/beth/archive/2010/08/24/just-don-t-go-thinking-there-s-a-cure.aspx

    As I make love

    make salad

    make mischief

    make peace

    I am always reminded

    by the little things

    the precious things

    that spring tears unbidden from my heart-eyes:

    Life is short

    And here’s the damn thing about it:

    You’re gonna die, gonna die for sure.

    And you can learn to live with love or without it

    But there ain’t no cure. –John Hiatt

    Being in love in concept

    is a far cry from being in love

    ‘for sure’.

    Being in love with this world

    brings grief, a sense of deep brokenness and a longing for home.

    Being a monk in this world, right here, right now

    brings a certain compassion

    that only swimming in these waters

    Can produce.

    The by-product

    the offspring of

    spaciousness and crowdedness

    fearlessness and terror

    sitting and running

    is compassion.

    Being a monk in this world doesn’t take the place of home. But it gives us moments of the sense of it.

    So if death is certain, and the time of death is uncertain, what’s important is this:

    To live in the world with a *monk’s heart and an artist’s eye.

    There just ain’t no cure for what ails us.

    Only medicine.

    • Andrea Cox says:

      Beautiful, the last two lines invite me to contemplate.
      "Being in love with this world
      brings grief, a sense of deep brokenness and a longing for home." Deeply resonates with my experience of being a bee looking for her lost hive.

  10. Wronda says:

    The Monk Within

    With a stomp of her feet she casts off the heavy shroud.
    She steps in the dance.
    In the freedom to BE, she expands and feels her own power.
    She says Yes and NO.
    She knows what is right.
    When she IS, it is easy and power flows like water – thru her and from her.
    We are and we have all we need.

  11. You there
    architecture of some
    holy space
    you stand to
    block my reflection
    light my shadow
    bring both to
    wholeness.

    Me here
    moving in and out
    of reflection and
    shadow pacing
    the aisles between
    altar and outside
    linking them in
    my heart.

  12. Cheryl Shay says:

    Headwaters

    Rising out of the quiet, dark places of the earth
    Through the grasses of the forest,
    Flowing clear and clean into the landscape,
    The Metolius River.
    Like me!

    Revealing myself in the world – a monk-
    Only after long distances traveled underground,
    Through the many submerged passageways of my soul,
    I flow into spaces carved out for me.
    Hard-packed earth awaiting my arrival,
    Rocks and pebbles warmed in the sun and ready for my cool,
    refreshing mist,
    and drenching of water-soaked power.

    I am home to teeming life
    And I carry whatever wants to travel with me.
    What I bring is soothing,
    Restoring,
    Renewing.
    I simply flow and blend in.
    Without concern, I am on a path called merging.
    My fresh waters meet salt water and we are One.

  13. Susan Moch says:

    my inner monk was
    cloistered within until she
    was wakened by Love.

  14. Dyck Dewid says:

    Monk…

    Short for monkeylater
    Or maybe monkey
    moinky
    monkalisa

    monkiker
    monkastic
    monkotheis
    moltenmonkobrain

    Long for mo
    Or maybe mmm
    onk
    ok

    Backward for knom
    Or maybe om
    o
    kom

    Also maybe nokm
    yoky
    okyoky
    komk

    Yea, that's me
    monk soup
    go ahead, drink…
    you'll feel good

  15. Sassy P says:

    Monk
    Loving Kindness
    Compassionately living life
    Trudging life becoming more doing less

  16. Terri says:

    My offering is at my blog!

  17. Christine, thanks for the beautiful invitation.

    Here is my response:

    She was rushing busy busy
    When she tripped on the reflection
    Stopped by beauty
    Stunned by wonder
    When she fell into the time warp
    Timeless beauty
    Endless wonder
    When she heard the monk-voice whisper
    'Write them beauty
    Sing them wonder'
    And she stopped to write a poem
    Twelve line thank you, ode to wonder.

  18. Cain says:

    A Good Place to Start

    Man’s world burns to the ground, lights up darkened hillsides
    to reveal there is no safe passage through the night.
    What masochistic twist of fate is this?
    Life goes easy after the loss of all one struggles for,
    burning sanctuary down until even pyre ash tastes sweet.

    Only surrender offers solace in a bed of cold, filthy cinders.
    Nude under sheets of denial, I ache to be exposed.
    How does mortality set the immortal soul aflame?
    A blaze of such incurable, inextinguishable anguish,
    ignited by a spark so tender, no one may resist or escape.

    Listen to the flames. Not to their crackle, to their hearts.
    To hear a heart we must be able to listen with one.
    "if" heaves the tomb open. "if only" buries it shut.
    Fearing Hell's black grief I void one half of Heaven.
    Self-protection is rejection, rejection of who we truly are.

  19. Ruth Jewell says:

    Thanks for inviting me

    Monk on the Street
    The line forms here
    men, women, old and young
    wait

    forgotten all
    except by
    The Monk on the Street

    A bowl of soup
    a handshake,
    contact …

  20. Lisa Barnes says:

    The Monk Room

    An inside space

    Darkly lighted

    A mysterious space

    Silently dimmed

    A solid place

    Spaciously emptied

    A hollow place

    Fully occupied

    Laughing and dancing

    In the monk room

  21. Ann says:

    The girl in the lavender robe
    with exposed saffron hair,
    hidden hands and a curvilinear
    hallux valgus, prays.
    Sometimes she is not alone.
    Transitioning breezes lift curtain
    hems and the insistent
    knock knock knock
    jiggles the bone plastic crucifix
    nailed to the lock rail
    on the kitchen wood door
    that opens outward.

  22. Deb Hillman says:

    Gazing out my window seat
    Drying grasses from the heat of summer
    Vacant stares as people walk their dogs in the courtyard
    Where are we going
    Where have we been
    Who is minding the store of the soul?
    Peace and solitude in a noisy world
    Peace and solitude in a noisy mind
    Peace and solitude lost to many
    Peace and solitude lost to me
    Reclaiming the Holy Sacred Spirit encased in this body
    Gazing out my window seat
    What are we going
    What have we been
    Who is minding the store of the soul?

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