Invitation to Poetry: Monk in the World

Welcome to our 46th Poetry Party!

The Poetry Parties have been on hiatus for a few months and I am delighted to bring them back as a regular feature this week.

I select an image and suggest a theme/title and invite you to respond with your poems or other reflections. Add your responses in the comments section. Feel free to take your poem in any direction and then post the image and invitation on your blog (if you have one) and encourage others to come join the party! (permission is granted to reprint the image if a link is provided back to this post)

On Friday, August 27th, I will draw a name at random from those who participate and send the winner a copy of Sacred Poetry: An Invitation to Write (an art journal I published with a collection of previous Poetry Party prompts).


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Poetry Party Theme: Monk in the World

I have been so deeply moved by the outpouring of response to my recent Monk Manifesto with almost 300 of you signing (and over 500 are participating in my free 7-day Monk in the World e-course).

As a way to deepen your personal expression of this commitment to live in contemplative, creative, and compassionate ways in the world, I invite you to write a poem which explores what it means for you to be a Monk in the World.  The image above is the reflection of St. Patrick's Cathedral in New York City in the shimmering glass of an adjacent office building.  I love this image because it speaks to me of the meeting place of ancient and modern which is really what living out a monastic way of life in the world is all about.

There is a wonderful poetry-writing exercise from poetry therapist John Fox's book Finding What You Didn't Lose: Expressing Your Truth and Creativity through Poem-Making (I equally recommend his other book Poetic Medicine: The Healing Art of Poem-Making) about exploring your inner poet.  I share the questions here, transposed to explore your inner monk.  Feel free to let this be a prompt for your own writing or take it in an entirely different direction.

Reclaiming Your Inner Monk:

What does your inner monk look like?
What does your inner monk feel like?
Where was your inner monk born?
What does your inner monk see?
Where is your inner monk recognized?
What does your inner monk know?
What does your inner monk imagine?
Where does your inner monk live?
What must your inner monk say aloud?
Why does your inner monk exist?

So please share your own poetic inspirations in the comments section below of living the contemplative life!  Let this be a gathering of monks in a virtual celebration!


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59 Responses to "Invitation to Poetry: Monk in the World"

  1. Sr Miriam says:

    Ancient Wisdom

    Ancient wisdom, youthful vigour, men and women, silent voices
    across the centuries you call.

    Hidden wisdom, faithful vigour, men and women, faithful voices
    through the desert you call.

    Gospel wisdom, hidden vigour, men and women, ancient voices
    to my heart you call.

    Faithful wisdom, silent vigour, men and women, hidden voices
    'Follow Christ!' you call.

  2. Andrea Cox says:

    I feel blessed, for all these beautiful and meaningful poems are soul food and I am very hungry. Thank you.

  3. poetry is not my artform of choice, but this was so inviting. i played here.

    http://impossiblethingswithgod.blogspot.com/2010/08/monk-in-world.html

    • Andrea Cox says:

      Elsa, words came rushing in when I saw the prompt. I have not written any poems since earlier this year. It was curious.
      I love your poem and it reflects this musing moment of mine so clearly.
      Thank you.

  4. Susan Moch says:

    one more! enjoying the ride of monks along the way!

    this monk needs to, wants
    to slow down long enough to
    be here now with you.

  5. Flinging sacred intent hither and yon
    Entering holy tussles with expectation
    Finding beauty alongside brokenness
    Holding space as sacred and full of possibility
    Such is the heart of a
    Monk in the World

  6. Carolyn says:

    let it be to me
    shaped as if by potter's hands
    solely, wholly Yours

  7. Betsy Kitch says:

    Thanks for all of this.
    Life of Grace

    To be in touch
    to be aware
    to listen intently
    creatively to another
    is Grace

    To be engrossed
    in painting
    or other art form
    seeing
    is grace

    Riding through
    the woods
    on bike path
    morning Tai Chi
    night prayer
    is Grace

    Hugging husband
    listening to
    a gifted other
    The rare occasion
    when scattered
    family is together
    is Grace

    Betsy B Kitch
    5-1-2010

  8. Julett M. Broadnax says:

    Am glad you resurrected this – for it is fun to play with words and musings. And I have so enjoyed all of the contributions – from remembered names and new names – thanks for all of the sharing.

    MONKHOOD

    Eyes lowered gazing inwards
    What grace enfolds me
    Peace and oneness with all creation
    In awe of the Creator being in me
    And I in Him
    Born and reborn often
    Each transition drawing me nearer
    Dare I follow His urgings and promptings
    Angels and demons owned and disowned
    Which to feed and which to starve
    Gazing deeply into another's eyes
    Seeing there accepted love and grace
    Gazing back affirming my own gifts & blessings
    Nothing earned or merited; all is gift
    Learning to live in peace
    Learning to accept our limitations
    Welcoming the complimentary completeness
    of gifted others to gifted self
    Drawing on hope that all will be well
    Shouting aloud To Him Be the Glory
    May I reflect unconditional love and acceptance
    Granted me by my beloved faithful companion

  9. monk in the world
    working
    monk in the street
    playing
    monk in the home
    dreaming
    monk in the cloister
    helping
    don't wait for enlightenment
    go to meet it where you are
    in the gap
    between systole and diastole
    breathing
    beating

  10. Linda Lee says:

    Imaginal Monk

    Born in the sea,
    Slipped out on the land,
    She opened her eyes
    As change took her hand,
    Leapt up at the sound
    Of hearing a voice,
    Gathered her gear
    And made her first choice:

    Walked up the mountain,
    Climbed dreams like stones,
    And gave us the meal
    Made of her bones.
    Her body the gift,
    Her blood given for us.
    The wind in the pines,
    The sound of the chorus:

    The cycles of moon,
    The turning around,
    The stars in the sky
    As feet hit the ground,
    “Dive back in the water
    That holds holy breath.
    Inhale shining waves
    To buoy up your death”:

    Careless sway
    At the crest of a hill –
    This current that kissed
    And pursued her until
    Her heart would soar dancing
    Winding down, flying free,
    A pure resurrection
    To be back in the sea.

  11. Andy says:

    A Monk in the World

    It was the strangest sight,
    a monk in Manhattan.
    A friar, actually,
    his brown robes swishing
    as he turned the block.
    I followed.

    Brown sandals skipped
    the puddles of shade
    and his white rope flicked
    at curious bystanders.
    He was in a hurry,
    I followed.

    Something was wrong.
    Sirens wailed as fire trucks
    cut through the traffic.
    The friar ran, the chaplain
    to pray their ending hour.
    I turned and fled.

    Dedicated to Fr Mychal Judge, OFM.

  12. Sally says:

    Guest of the monastery
    I am absorbed by the silence
    Shielded in solitude
    Stitched seamlessly into the
    Sweet silver-toned symphony of worship.

    Resident of the world
    I am a sanctuary of stillness
    A soothing shelter
    Serving shattered souls
    With the soft solemnity of Sabbath rest.

  13. Dyck Dewid says:

    Oh Ma
    Dey tryin change me
    ' be more like dem
    dey want me agree wid dem value
    follow dey rules
    say no do waves
    Jus like Ma say

    Dey don't know
    I jus inside out
    from dem
    wid da same pieces n parts
    but no steerin wheel
    no top or bottom
    'less sometime I say

    Feel me charge-up
    on nuttin
    run wid no gas
    to find dat ting
    dat God ting
    alone yet be
    in da same soul dem

  14. Elaine T says:

    In this roiling world
    a little monk hears
    your bitter rant
    your boot-on-the-butt
    violent certitude

    Sees in your hard righteous eyes
    deep down glee
    at our future torment

    A little brown-robed monk
    gazes at your red red heart
    quivering in its fear
    gazes at your red red heart
    and just for a moment
    stills its anguish
    with the gentle caress
    of listening love

    the monk in the world

  15. Anna Marie says:

    "Unununium"

    If I take a deep enough breath
    something shoots
    from my shoulders
    through my arms as though
    an element of the periodic
    table
    uncapped itself
    bubbling out my wrists
    and my hands
    feel
    holey.
    A monk is in the world
    the world is composed
    and decomposed
    of these transitional touching things
    sisters
    to the fizzing in my finger shells.
    How difficult it is
    to move the hands
    aside
    and let the hallowed heart go first.

  16. Geralyn Phelps says:

    Thank you for all your wonderful words. It took a while, but I finally wrote this:

    A Hundred Wind-powered Turbines

    Our ancestors stood their ground
    Determined immigrants
    Arriving like monks in the world,
    Fidelity in motion.

    Here a hundred monuments
    To their vows of stability.
    Prayers were for rain and a good crop,
    Steadfast hearts familiar with hours
    And seasons.

    It stands to reason, then
    In their absence:
    A wind farm, host
    To a myriad of giants (or angels)
    Wings spanning two semi trailers
    Each
    Twenty-six stories high
    Glorious hidden generations
    Of power.

    And so my prayer:
    That some Trinity
    Might inspire in me
    A peaceful place so spacious.

  17. Pam M. says:

    This also did not come to me "in time", but the picture reminded me of the struggle now for the Muslims to build a place of worship in New York. I understand that the Cathedral faced similar hostility when it was being built. So, my poem…

    God in the City

    Squeezed among
    towering buildings
    small places of worship
    tenaciously hold on.

    Others have left,
    succumbing to the
    temptation of
    money-to-be-made.

    Magnificent domes have
    disappeared, steeples toppled,
    replaced by one more
    look alike box.

    Only the few holdouts
    keep God from being
    cast out
    of our daily lives.

    Those brave enough
    to try to build anew
    face hostility all around.
    We need room for the spirit,

    Reminders, like a bird
    on a park bench,
    of all that is
    beyond our reach.

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