Invitation to Poetry: Moments

August 31, 2009 · by Christine

Welcome to our 39th Poetry Party!

I select an image and suggest a theme/title and invite you to respond with your poems or other reflections. Add them in the comments section and a link to your blog (if you have one).  Make sure to check the comments for new poems added and I encourage you to leave encouraging comments for each other either here or at the poet’s own blog.

Feel free to take your poem in any direction and then post the image and invitation on your blog if you have one and encourage others to come join the party! (permission is granted to reprint the image if a link is provided back to this post)

On Friday, September 4th, I will draw a name at random from those who participate and send the winner a signed copy of my newest zine: Sacred Poetry: An Invitation to Write.

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Poetry Party Theme: Moments

Art and poetry are essentially about savoring a moment in time, looking and listening closely and breaking open its gifts and basking in its wonder.  Last week I posted a few words and a video link about the moments that make up our lives.

I took this photo at the beach last week. I love this woman’s pensive look, I wonder what her experience is of this moment in time.  Is she fully present to the beauty before her?  Is she dreaming of the future?  Is she contemplating the past?  For this week’s Poetry Party I invite you to write a poem about a moment in time.  It could be something entirely ordinary that when tended reveals something sacred.

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27 Responses to “Invitation to Poetry: Moments”

  1. Martha Louise Says:

    Rapture

    Unfurling blessings
    Morning glory blossoming
    Entwining my soul

    Martha Louise Harkness
    August 31, 2009

  2. Andrea Cox Says:

    I had a ‘moment’ less than 24 hours ago in which a poem was spontaneously born from the depth of my heart and soul. I was looking for an image, and voila synchronicity! To my delight receiving this prompt is bringing it all together.

    Poetry Man

    You haunt me with your raspy voice

    And your words kicking up the dust around my soul

    Sometimes you gift me with a smile

    And other times your words sting me

    And they bring tears to my eyes

    If you hope to stir my soul with your words

    And you want to share a piece of you with me

    And you silently wish that I might see you

    Hear you beyond the sound of your voice

    And feel the importance of your essence shared

    Then let me tell you that you do, and much more

    In the brief moments in which I see your soul behind your infinite eyes

    I start to shiver and my skin flushes

    Heat rises and my heart is beating quickly

    Mysteries are being laid before me

    Unknown worlds beckon to be explored

    I feel like flying and floating, tumbling in space

    My thinking becomes disorganized and I lose my focus

    Drunkenly I find my way home through the dark

    Awakening the next morning hung over from so many words and emotions

    And the feel of you covers me throughout the week

    Like honey brown molasses.

  3. kigen Says:

    AUGUST DOUBLE-TAKE

    marble of a god
    set on a wooden table —
    my cat in my lap

    ~ kigen

  4. Janet in Toronto Says:

    across the coffee cups
    your jawline above a white cotton shirt
    evokes a love memory set in time
    before the complications that
    make up our entwined lives

    you and me, youthful
    not yet in love

    a different shirt, but white
    jawline slackened, but yours

    love beyond what we knew
    or could even imagine

  5. Lois Perron Says:

    Tears as I write

    I gaze upon the great chasm
    That separates us
    Is there no secure path
    That will allow us to meet halfway?
    Must I really take
    That huge leap of faith
    In order to fly into your arms again?

  6. Geralyn Phelps Says:

    Morning Prayer

    I awake and remember
    Your turn

    My heart opens to you
    Receiving your presence and action
    In stillness.

  7. Monkheart Says:

    magicmoment
    momentous
    moment
    momen
    mome
    mom
    mo
    m
    *
    m
    mom
    mome
    momen
    moment
    momentous
    magicmoment
    (repeat forever)

    *vast emptiness, nothing special

  8. Sunrise Sister Says:

    Hi Christine, I actually used a picture of one of my nearly blank/beginning canvases to reflect on how the painting on that canvas “may” come together in different MOMENTS:)
    Love the poetry that’s here already!

    Moments
    Flat white surface, no tooth, no direction, no aid is offered from the canvas
    Can the painter master this surface, this call,
    this moment

    A formula, a purpose, a yearning
    What will emerge, what image, what pattern will be caught
    in this moment

    Will it hang forever, find the trash bin or dump heap
    Perhaps bask with love and honor in a home of praise and joy
    A reminder of someone else’s
    moment in time

  9. Karen (leapingbackwards) Says:

    Pain bolts across my belly like a thief
    wielding a thousand knives

    The amber child cradled in white
    gently accepts his fate

    In the end, golden yellow light
    reveals that mercy has arrived

    The secret promise of a homecoming.

  10. Kathy Flugel Colle Says:

    The sands at the Cape
    hold our secret deep
    within their dunes.
    The memory
    we never created…

    We laughed and whispered
    as we kissed
    that someday
    we’d make love
    among the sea oats and sand.

    No…ours wasn’t strong enough for this—
    The ocean rolls in and slowly fades out.
    Like you…
    memory and soothing mantra.
    I am washed clean.

    I light the surface with
    scattered diamonds…free.

  11. Marisa @ Getting Back To Basics Says:

    Come join the Poetry Party whose Theme is:
    “Moments”
    sponsored by Christine Valters Paintner at Abbey of the Arts
    “Art and poetry are essentially about savoring a moment in time,
    looking and listening closely and breaking open its gifts
    and basking in its wonder.”

    …for a little boy I cared for a few years ago…

    As You Are
    If I could have my way,
    I would cease the pendulous
    passage of time,
    to keep you
    …as you are.

    And I would etch your elfin smile
    and dandelion clock hair
    into stone,
    to keep you
    …as you are.

    But, alas,
    I have neither the power to suspend time,
    or the crafter’s gifted hand,
    to keep you
    …as you are.

    So I will stand aside and watch,
    as with the wax and wane of tides and shifting sand,
    you evolve from boy to man,
    and I will shed a selfish tear.
    I couldn’t, for just a little while, keep you
    …as you are.

    Marisa
    March 23, 2004

  12. Janet in Toronto Says:

    Geralyn….

    I keep coming back to this page and meditating on your tiny-perfect poem.

    Thank you.

  13. Shelley Says:

    Andrea, I like “Poetry Man” – especially the last two lines –

    And the feel of you covers me throughout the week
    Like honey brown molasses

    Reminds me of the deep connections we can make with others simply through good words that open the heart & soul.

  14. Kathy Flugel Colle Says:

    Marisa~Your poem made me smile…I’m mother to 4 sons and would that i could, etch their “elfin smile and dandelion clock hair into stone…” Just lovely…..

  15. Tom Delmore Says:

    A Patsy Cline Moment

    I feel like a character
    In a Patsy Cline song.
    Already broke up and cryin.
    No happy notes to hang
    My hat on, cause she took
    All them away. Never sayin
    What you meant till after
    I married the wrong women.
    All those streets of tears, salty
    And not worth a wipe.
    We could have danced to another
    Song or just let me play
    Out my own.
    But your voice said it over and over
    And no kiss can get you back.
    I fall to pieces.

  16. lucy Says:

    People Watching

    Do they know who they will become?
    Are they already there?

    Pink crocs and purple cast, she floats
    across the playground.
    Will she be a nurse mending others or
    the daredevil breaking bones?

    Tiny son in his own blue crocs,
    raises his voice to the sky.
    Budding opera singer? Talk show host?
    Perhaps a bellowing father.

    Newborn babes & scampering tots,
    mothers, fathers, aunties too.
    Do they know who they will become?
    Are they already there?

    The merry-go-round spins
    faster and faster.
    Which moments of the blur will
    stand in clarity?

    Bell bottom jeans, peasant top
    & flowing hair, she sits upon the campus wall.
    Could she know who she would become?
    Was she already there?

  17. Carolyn Says:

    Bearing Witness

    A
    task so
    simple yet
    holy: three came
    slowly, silently.

    With tender, loving hands
    they spread the clothe, arranging
    the fabric as if threads were gold -
    sarcophagus transform-ed
    now sacred container -

    briefly touch-ed by
    fingers bidding
    an earthly
    farewell
    kiss.

  18. mike dunford Says:

    wounded warrior
    waiting by runway
    flight to japan
    surgery then home
    no home stateside
    wounded warrior
    wondering why
    whatfor
    waiting by runway
    bleeding from his soul

  19. Grady Patterson Says:

    Wow – what a breathtaking set of poetry !!!

    Motion / Movement

    Life not lived, but merely escaped -
    Unlife: without newness or growth -
    Chemical vampire – animated, but not alive…
    Motions without movement

    Had true life ever been known?
    Sending of roots – reaching for sunlight?
    Planted in earth, yet rootless …
    Motions without movement

    Drifting, in search of joy -
    Finding no meaning in oblivion
    Repeating failed experiments
    Motions without movement

    Giving of a strained volition
    Receiving castoff fear and pain
    Broken reed in careless hands
    Motions without movement

    Motions without movement
    Without movement
    Movement

    Movement
    A vision of choice to be made
    A knowledge sans mind or experience
    A faith born of nothing within

    Movement
    A seed, long dormant, sends out roots
    A life, void of growth, begins anew
    A child is born

  20. mike dunford Says:

    nice work all. movement,motion and memories. am curious,olive drab. did anyone feel a connection between the woman at the beach and the soldier on the runway?separations can bring people closer together or they cause a disconnection.as a fine woman i know said, ” i wasn’t going to love someone in the military and spend time worrying about him. then, he got deployed and i was worrying about him. so i said to myself,you love him, commit. he loved her. they got married. he got redeployed and was back in iraq. they survived that and are now starting their third year of marriage.anyway, if you have thoughts about the picture and the poem, i’d like to hear them. continue your good work. mike

  21. Beth Patterson Says:

    Hi Christine et al–
    I thought I submitted something but I guess I didn’t. It was a poem-on-the-spot, but it was something like this:

    The turning point
    is a moment
    when responsibility for
    turns to responsibility to
    and we are whole.

    No past
    No future
    only present possibilities
    in which past and future
    are cleansed and readied.

  22. Pam Says:

    Even though this was written for Inauguration Day, I have also realized that it could apply to other moments of life – like a wedding day.

    Inauguration Day 2009

    There is a moment, sometimes,
    that clearly separates
    the memory laden past
    from the unknowable future.

    This is the space for imagining
    all that could be
    with one who calls out
    the best in us.

    It is a shining moment
    that gathers the light
    and all our attention,
    a triumph, not to be seen again.

    We hold our breath,
    keeping the treasure in our grasp,
    just a bit longer,
    not wanting to lose its luster.

    Inspiration is in the air
    and gratitude
    that the long, unyielding road
    has led to this day, this moment,

    When one young man
    gives us every reason
    to believe again
    that yes,
    yes, we can.

  23. Barbara Gibson Says:

    ON A LOG

    The woman with white hair
    sits at the edge of the woods
    contemplating green, contemplating
    not-green.

    The leaves of summer
    are fallen onto the dry twigs of winter.
    She is toward becoming a twig,
    becoming winter.

  24. Cheryl Macpherson Says:

    Touched

    “Look”, she breathed.
    Framed perfectly
    by land and tree in black silhoutte.
    Fire sinking to meet it’s own illuminated pathway across the ocean.
    A moment where time and eternity intertwined.

  25. Terri Says:

    A MOMENT’S THOUGHT
    a pensive moment
    stirred up by thoughts
    of you drifting by on
    a cloudy day

    a flash of your
    laugh as you ate
    strawberry shortcake
    celebrating life

    your lips pursed as
    you plucked at them
    while confronting
    challenge freely

    your arms and legs
    as they whittled
    away to nothing
    fighting a losing battle

    all of this in caught
    in a circle of light
    the tilt of my daughter’s head
    with curls so like yours

    the battle won
    in the grace of a new
    creation that
    echoes of you

    © 2009, T. Stewart

  26. Rebecca Says:

    I posted a late entry on Friday if you care to take a look.

  27. Elaine T Says:

    “In the Moment”

    hey kids
    I’m “in the moment”
    my old lips
    freshly lovingly applied
    with l’Oreal’s coral gloss
    grip
    like a lipsticked worm
    my pure white filter tip
    I inhale deeply
    good good smoke
    fills my lungs
    pours out my smile
    I’m just like you
    flawed
    beautiful
    and I know it

    Dedicated to the smoking hot beautiful old lady in the video